Lust

I can smell your blood,

Can’t wait to see it flood.

Transfuse..

Waiting for a moment to strike,

To end your life with a knife.

Desecrate..

Can’t wait too see your innards out,

You won’t have any time to shout,

Putrefying..

Standing behind your back,

Waiting for our feelings to impact.

Negatively..

Why so suprising?

This is your doom,

As I’m standing there

Watching at your womb.

You were divergent
I was urgent,

You weren’t pugnacious

And I was so rapacious.

Author's Note

Tell me if there's anything you would change, just feel free! And thanks :D

Reviews

[Nath]

Amazing!
I really enjoyed reading this insight into the mind of a killer about to strike, and the way you phrased it, really makes the words haunt you.
Compelling write!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thank you very much! :D

[Nath]

You are very welcome!^^

[Mr.Cardigan]

ITS SO DARK!!!... I love it :) great read

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks.. :D

[Relic]

Yikes, This is incredibly dark and sardonic. Interesting diction though. Sounds like a horror movie or a serial killer on the loose.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, it really does hahah. Thanks :D

[Shaquana Adams]

This has such dark and powerful imagery! Great job! :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks. (:

[Beverly Jane]

Oh, wow! How dark. It really sends chills of delight and fear through you. Awesome job!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks. :D

[Beverly Jane]

No problem!cx

[Sarai Lee]

Vicious and violent! I like the syllable repetition. Your word choice was great for this one!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, I was in that kind of mood. Thanks.

[Ruth]

Powerful imagery here! A darkness carried that only the writer perhaps will have true insight of...provoking piece :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks heh :D

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