Affectionate night

Sitting alone in the dark,

Wondrous night embracing me.
I'm in your tender spark,
Sailing together in my imagined sea.
Oh night, my solace,
I like it when you're keeping me warm.
My lady, so flawless,
I like it when you're keeping me safe in this dorm.
It's just me and you.
One bit of love I got,
Can I have it two?

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Feel free! :D

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I liked the dorm part partly because when I was in college, we used the term "dorm sex" to mean "the quietest sex ever". Haha.

Very nicely written. Good job :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

Awesome hahah. Thanks. :D

[Sarai Lee]

I like the reflection of night time and solitude being like lovers to you. There is a lot of beauty in both those things. Well done!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, thanks.

[Beverly Jane]

I love how you compare night, to beauty. Really quite lovely.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks.. :D

[Beverly Jane]

No problem!:D

[Chris]

I remember your older pieces and this shows good growth and yet is still you. Take care Rob...

[R.A. Youngblood]

I guess so. Thank you very much Chris :D

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Love how you broke conventions ! Night is usually considered dangerous and frightining, you make it lovable and safe. The personification of night in a lover definitely helped conveying the message. Loved it, great job !

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, I consider it beautiful, there's no more place for fear, night is relaxing and lovely to me. Thank you very much! :D

[Weasley]

That was really sweet and cut. I like the rhythm of your poem. Normally I don't really like short poems but I think if this one was any longer it would be kind of lagging and start to ramble. Really nice. :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

I see, I see..Well, thank you! :D

[Allen Smuckler]

Such terrific imagery R.A.
beautiful and of course heartfelt and 'flawless"...
Do you want to make it "two". as in I'll have two (me and you)
it works both ways but I like the play on words...
Great write R.A.
allen

[R.A. Youngblood]

I don't know, I'll see. xD Thanks Allen, I appreciate it. :D

[Nikole]

I'm not sure if I'm understanding the last line. The rest of the poem is really great, but then I come to the final line and it fits, but I just don't understand it.

[R.A. Youngblood]

It's about asking the night for more love. :P Thanks.