Fantasy moonwalk

Liquid yellow sky,

Under the blue sun.

Oh, there's a butterfly!

It's so lovely to see such fun.

 

Silence is the song of the year,

All the pain I've felt just dissapeared.

Silence, you're so lominous,

That yellow clouds, still so voluminous.

 

No, there's no more fright,

At this purple wondrous night.

I just want to be free,

It's wonderful, can't you see?

 

Oh, this is my chance!

I just want to dance,

On this prodigious moon

At the noon!

Author's Note

I just got a plenty of inspiration. Yeah, this is not a dark one. :P Tell me if there's any grammar mistakes or something.

Reviews

[Destinyxi]

This is great. I like the rhyming. When I read poems that rhyme, I tend to check to see if the rhymes feel forced, and this doesnt. So that's great :P It made for a smooth read.

Thanks for sharing

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thank you very much :D

[Blue Ivory]

I love the absurd irony here! Made me smile :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah..thanks :D

[Fréyjä Helv..]

It's like sending out smiles to everyone who reads this. nice job

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thank you :D

[Barbara Walker]

This feels very joyful and light. I could almost see you dancing!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah haha! Thanks :D

[Akashi]

Simply fascinating. Marvelously done.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thanks again :D

[Akashi]

You welcome. ;)

[Melobldnfr]

Inspiration is lovely. Divine even. Thanks.

[R.A. Youngblood]

You're welcome and thanks! :D