I can't do this...

I can't deal with all this pain
It's simply just not right
But when you hold me in your arms
I feel like we're such a sight
We argue and fight a lot
And then my world falls down
You ignore me all the time
Yet theres just this one small sound
It comes from the fragile skin
All around my wrists
The blood drips down my arms so pale
It's life most greatest twist
As I lay and hope I die
You approach me with a smile
You say you're sorry you still love me
But I know it's lasts a short while
I don't even know if you give a s**t
It's hard to read your thoughts
You mess me up with every word
Yet have my love so bought...

I can't do this anymore...
Please just give me a break...
Stop tearing my heart apart...
Leave me be for f**k sake...

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow. This is really good and relateable

Lovely xo

[Matthew vonHone]

There are no doubts about the thoughts of the speaker here.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Strong indictment against the tormentors here.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and direct words in this poem. Sometime we need separation and time to think. No weakness in this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sophles]

its a very reachable aand understandable poem xxxx