Ssshh don't tell them..

broken hearts and lonely souls

now you look, low and behold

lonely souls find broken hearts

make them whole like pretty art

boy meets girl or boy meets boy

girl meets girl and causes the joy

people meet their loves of lives

and make that world a happy size

make the partner happy, not crying

they don't know that you are dying

they do things you swore you wouldnt

loving them? you knew you couldn't...

They don't care about your feelings

crawl aware and say you're healing

cutting through the pain of hoping

bloods drips down, you say you're coping..

They don't know just how you feel

sometimes they don't know you're real

but just when they need you most

they will come and call you the host

ask for what they want from you

then run away, no comforting you

do whatever they do best

think they're better than the rest

soon they'll come back to ask for more

they will find you on the floor

in a pool of your own blood...

 

 

 

You knew they never understood.

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

Brill...luv the rhyme and meter. Excellent! :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

why thankyou (:

[Kenneth The Poet]

Overloaded with awesome.

[Coyote Poetry]

You went in many directions in this poem. We learn many things in the emotion of love. It will test our body and spirit. If we are lucky. We become wiser and kinder. When we learn all pain and pleasure is returned. We become more careful. Thank you for the excellent poem. I did like the ending.
Coyote

[gman]

a bit dark but awsome