You made me better

You made me better

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

The day I realized who I really was
was the day I saw you smile.
The day I looked at my reflection
you stopped my running miles.
You helped me come to terms with me
and listen to my mind.
If you never came into my life
I'd carry on living a lie.
Forever is the longest time
I want to share with you
I'm happy if there ever was
a time I helped you through.
Because I'd do anything 
to see your shining eyes
to watch them glisten and stare at me
my mending heart ties.
I listen to your every word
and learn from every line
I love to hear your angelic voice
I'm glad you are now mine.

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


Author's Note

FaithfullyJennyBear
For my girlfriend :3

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A very likable which i felt didn't need the rhyme scheme as I found it a little distracting and almost forced at times. I probably wrong as I m no expert,just being honest

Posted 13 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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