forever remembered...

Every memory, thrown away

true love's entwined hearts

put to death it lay

we had something special

it will never be remade

but everytime I think of you

I wish love never frayed

days of laying on the hill

curled up by your side

of wandering the streets

with nowhere to go in mind

waking up in my bed

while you were still asleep

stroking your mousey brown hair

my feelings so deep

your eyes, the first things

I saw in the morning

your smile, the last thing

as the night was dawning

the things you bought me

I keep in my room

the thoughts that appear

like I left you too soon...

I didn't know what I had

until you left my side

I'm sorry everything..

you asked me to be your bride...

we were laying in my bed,

holding each other close

'will you marry me?'

escaped your lips

softer than a rose

I replied with the answer

that would have changed me for good,

'yes' is what I said

it was a great answer but...

we fell apart a bit too soon

my mind started changing

more times than the moon

it was my fault we ended

but still to this day

I spare a thought just for you

do you think of me in this way?

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

An excellent write..xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice expression. Very cool indeed.

[StarSandwich]

Love this write it so cute and nice. Memories always come back to haunt people x3

[Coyote Poetry]

Memories are like ghost escaping to haunt our life. We remember faces and situations. We will wish for better endings. Sometime we seek forgiveness. I like this poem. Took me on a journey of questions that can't be answered. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jeremy Baker]

One or two typos in there but essentially a lovely poem and well written!