My wonderland...

It's weird to think  that something so perfect

could be took for granted.

I wish upon every star I see

wish for a life with no drama,

wish for a mother with no anger,

wish for a father.. in general,

wish my brother wasn't the son of a monster.

I just don't see what I did to deserve this.

 

 

People don't understand

that I'm living in a wishing wonderland

where bunnies and foxes dance in the sun

and leaves are green and it's all good fun

where everyday something new happens in life

where there is no such thing as saddness, pain or strife

where cries of children have never been heard

and the only shadows that exist are from a big bird

there's only nice people, who love, cherish and care

where nothing is scary, like a big fluffy bear

bad words don't exist and cookies grow on trees

my wishing wonderland is where I want to be..

Author's Note

Random thought.. Not my best, but I'm ill, I tried :P x

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I really like this. I wish that we really could escape forever into our created wonderlands. Thanks for sharing this...xx

[StarSandwich]

Random. But I liked it. I wish Cookies grew on trees " / gutted :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I know right :L

[The Pencil]

Fairly average, I suppose XX

[compositionc]

COOKIES GROW ON TREES?
My dove, where is this place?

-is jealous-

I love how full of thought it is. I like what you be mentioning. Bunnies and foxes dancing in the sun. It makes me smile.
:D

[Lily Mae]

Kind of like living in the Wonka Factory :) I love it..xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad even though you didn't think it was your best work. It made me smile.

[Jeremy Baker]

Ahhh ... cookies growing on trees ... you're talking my language! Very nice write!