Army vs. love

You're in my arms now

I'm never letting go

I want to be your girl

I just want you to know

when I see your blue eyes

my heart skips a beat

when I feel your soft touch

and when our lips meet

I loose my mind

I just can't breathe

please be mine

I'll never decieve

I'll be yours forever

because when you're with me

I see no other people

we are both free

i wish you could see

how much you mean.

I miss you within seconds

you're the best beauty I've seen.

Don't leave to soon,

I want to lay with you,

and stare at the moon.

A cold breeze passes

the sun sets in the sky

and as the stars twinkle

you let out a sigh

'I have to leave baby,

I won't be gone long,

I will always love you,

and I'm never wrong'

As I shed a tear,

you hold me so close

'I don't want you to leave

I'll miss you so

just stay by my side

til morning again

then stay for longer

and you can leave when

I have lost the energy

to speak my own mind

then you can go

leave me behind'

I know it's your job

I know you enjoy it

you know I love you

and I must admit

the sight of you happy

always makes my day,

an adorable guy.

You're perfect I'd say.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Men in the army need woman to keep their mind filled with hope when the Army make their life miserable. I like the positive and hopeful feel of this poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote