Your...

Your eyes are amazing,

with their colour changing gleam.

Depending on the mood you're in

they change from blue to green.

 

Your kiss, as sweet

as the first bite of a cherry,

Your lips, as delightful

as the first taste of a strawberry.

 

Your touch, as enticing

as a trace down my spine.

The biting of my neck

always works every time.

 

Your hold, as tight as

you're never letting go.

I will always love you.

I just wish you could know.

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a lovely poem, with a uncomplicated structure and rhyme, and a sweet message. One nit pick though - you have spelled "tight" as "tighy" at the start of the last stanza. Otherwise perfect; don't change a thing!