Whispering Heart

The words of a whispering heart,

they'll never be heard.

You see, no one ever speaks

the words of love.

They speak the words of a

loud mouth mind.

 

 

The words between

and heart and mind

are very different.

 

 

You see the person you once loved.

Your mind says 'hey'

but your heart says

'I still love you, be mine again, please?'

 

 

As you grow up,

you learn how to ignore your heart

and keep it under control.

It gets less difficult

the more you do it.

 

I'm a teenager,

thought I was in love once over..

realized it wasn't true love,

but just a passing by heartache.

 

 

I believe that love takes time to develop.

It takes years.. Not months.

My opinion differs to others

but 'tis what I believe.

 

People get hurt through love.

When they choose to ignore the mind

and listen to the heart.

Some times it's a good idea,

but not always.

 

Anyway, to conclude my poetic lecture..

 

Put a balance between your heart and mind.

Or suffer the consequence of loving too much,

or not loving at all.

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

Everything is such a fine balanace, it seems! This is wonderful love! xx

[AndyJCash]

Hehe, I love the "Anyway, to conclude my poetic lecture..." but some good points well made and I'm glad this is here to help people understand the difference between infatuation and love.

[Jeremy Baker]

Ah, love gone bad. Sadly a feeling we can all relate to - well, I can, anyway.. You treated this subject well. Good writing.

[Lily Mae]

Balance in all things is perfect... great write..x

[Maimai]

I love this poem! I can relate to it, which you will understand if you read my poem 'Chris'.
This is a great poem and keep writing :)