She took..

I'm crumbling away.

I don't understand.

I can see you no longer?

My heart feels like sand...

 

A friendship I thought was perfect,

took from my reach too soon.

Jelous over nothing?

She took away my moon.

 

She took away my sun.

She took away my smile.

She took away my only reason,

I have not ran for miles.

 

She took away the twinkling eyes

of a friend I really love.

She took away the perfect voice

of the angel from above.

 

She left me with nothing.

No happiness to my name.

He's gone forever now.

I'm going slightly insane.

 

I still have the flowers

you picked from the ground.

I still have the text from when

you invited yourself around.

 

I've still got the lighters

of which yourself you didn't trust.

I've still got the orange rock

still covered with sandy dust.

 

The lake shall no longer ripple.

The corn field will no longer sway.

The birds will soon stop singing

because She took him away.

Author's Note

A really close friend of mine text me last night saying he can never talk to me again because his girlfriend (who he is now engaged to) hated the fact he would text me when he got bored and hang out with me when there was nothing to do. She got jelous of a simple friendship, and now we shall not be friends. He refuses to talk to me.

Jelousy.. such an awful thing =/

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Not bad. It could use some work though. I like the flow and your use of words, like i said a little tweaking and this would be great.

[Akshat♥]

so mean...friendship is so hard to continue if lover comes around..
i feel sad for you for loosing him..but according to me..you should continue
to talk to him..he will definitely understand you at some point of time..
awesome poem...