Be able to...

Be able to...

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

Don't judge me,

I know my life ain't perfect

but it's not that bad?

I've been through some bad things

but I've experienced some good.

 

'Put a smile on your face,

you look better when you smile,

your green eyes glisten,

and you make me warm inside'

 

'Live life to the full,

even if you have no reason too'

 

'Been better, been worse'

 

These are the words I live by,

either what I've made up,

or what I've been told.

 

What I expect from life?

Goes untold even to myself.

What I do know is that...

 

 

I wanna be able to smile

at least once a day.

I want to be able to laugh

when things don't go my way.

I want to be able see

especially through the dark.

I want to be able to show

without leaving a mark.

 

Too much to ask?

Well maybe it is,

but I'll spend my life trying

because in my opinion..

 

'Life's worth the try'

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


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A lot of good wisdom in your words. We need to look for the good in a life. We need to smile and laugh. Life is hard enough.
"I want to be able see
especially through the dark.
I want to be able to show
without leaving a mark."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this. My fav lines are
"I wanna be able to smile
at least once a day.
I want to be able to laugh
when things don't go my way."
Its so true
Sarah :-)



Posted 13 Years Ago


the opening lines say it all! awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wanna be able to smile
at least once a day.
I want to be able to laugh
when things don't go my way.
I want to be able see
especially through the dark.
I want to be able to show
without leaving a mark. I loved this stanza. I feel like this all the time. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice work! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


And so it is love! Life is but a test we all have to question and search through! Powerful poem xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice work, this is why adults should write off teenagers as know-nothing, ignorant pipsqueaks, but there is one piece of wisdom I offer, age brings on tougher, harsher experiences and that is when the message is needed even more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A great poem and message.. Life is most definitely worth a try..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


i saw myself in your poem today. its a great write hun keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


O_o loved it!! yeah this is so true. 'Lifes worth a try' :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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