The avoidance of you

You pull me in

with your seductive stare

I just don't know what to do

It's hard you know?

A guy who I loved

ulling me back.

Being told I shouldn't

my heart saying I should..

I know my friends are right.

My heart, most definately wrong.

But it's dificult to avoid you

when everything I do

just makes me remember our times.

A part of me wants you,

that's the wrong part.

The part that tells me I shouldn't be with you?

That's correct.

I don't want to love you again.

But the more I resist

the more I get pulled in..

 

 

 

Someone help me?

Author's Note

Haven't wrote an un-ryhming poem in aaaages :L

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love and hate. Two words that lead us to heaven and hell. I like the way you told the story in the poem. The battle to understand love is a lifetime battle. I like the ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sarah Hobbit]

I know whats that is like, it happened to me. I think one has to find something to takes ones mind off that person lol. I like this poem. good non-ryhming.
Sarah :-)

[joshua deathdealer]

I agree with Chris that sometimes rhyme schemes act as a shackle on our artistic abilities but that is just an opinion. The issue behind this write is something that I myself battle with. Excellent write.

[Chris]

Not all poems need to rhyme. Sometimes rhyme schemes act as a shackle on our artistic abilities, but of course that's varies with the writers.

A euphonic, and emotional poem. Well done.

[HappyTaylor]

This is amazing, and it speaks to me, because I just recently felt like this. Keep your chin up honey.

[compositionc]

Awesomely done.

[Helpless]

very good!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work.

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes love and passion have that magnetic pull...and there's just nothing we feel we can do about it.. I loved this write and I think it's perfect..xx