My last?

The last poem.

The last words.

This is all I'll do.

'Cause everything I think about

reminds me just of you.

I can't do this anymore.

I always have these moods.

Where everyone around me,

my temper I will lose.

I take it out on close ones,

ones I care for the most.

I try and turn emotions off

bur it doesn't seem to amuse.

One thing I do know.

You can do a lot better

than settling with the worst of all.

Apparantly I'm the settler.

Do yourself a favour,

avoid me all in all.

It stops all major heartbreak

and picks you up when you fall...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have forty books of poetry and story. I couldn't stop writing. I believe better to write down then scream out at people who not care. Heartbreak will be many in a life. Lovers, family members and friends will leave us weak and sad. I look at it this way. Better to have loved and knew pain. Then die alone. I like and understand the desire of the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Hello, Goodbye]

good write.. and do not let the 'last' be literal.. unless its meant merely for this particular person subject manner..

[BigDaddySiddle]

don't leave! because i'll frankly have to get several milk containers to stamp on as a way of letting out my emotion :(

[JustHeather.]

Trust me, this won't be your last poem.

[Helpless]

i hope this isn't your last poem.... :(