Haiku

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's destined to be

Broken for eternity

Typical for me.

Author's Note

Maybes it's not really a Haiku because apparanly it's supposed to be about nature? I dunno, don't really care, it still goes '5, 7, 5' :P x

Reviews

[Helpless]

powerful.... i feel ya

[Ruth]

Beautifully concise and worded...yes..great work love xx

[Lily Mae]

I love it..nice work..x

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

It's amazing how well this fits the structure! I like the colors, too. And it seems like a haiku to me with the 5-7-5.

[HappyTaylor]

Beautiful. Flows perfectly too.

[compositionc]

That was really good. It fit really well, and it made sense too.