Revenge

Revenge

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

Revenge is sweet

Like the sugary lies being poured from your mouth.

I know you don't actually care,

So this is why right now,

My plan commenses.

Watch your back,

I'll be watching.

You'll be sorry that sweet treacle left your lips.

I'll be in your darkest nightmares,

Your most frightening fears.

The pleasure of you

Petrified,

Excites

Me.

You should think next time you try to hurt a girl,

With the sickest mind you can find.

I'll be waiting until you least expect it.

I'm warning you now.

Run.

The electric is rushing though my veins.

Enticing.

Pleasure.

The feeling that I need.

All just from seeing you being torn apart.

Emotionally and physical.

Goodbye my love.

Revenge is sweet.

Just like the sweet syrup that pours from your veins.

Right now.

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


Author's Note

FaithfullyJennyBear
This is weird.. never wrote like this before, and it doesn't even have personal meaning :') cool :L xx

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Sometimes things just squeak out of us from no where :) x Great powerful write non the less...xxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very direct and strong poem. Anger and disappointment can create the desire for revenge. But revenge always backfire. Hate and revenge come back to us in double. Better to smile and pretend you do not care. A excelelnt poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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