"Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be."
Wonderful and powerful lines, Jenny! This is such a nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Indeed, we all plan our own escape from this world, to live in peace with ourselves!
Mk.t.g
I hate when pens run out of ink. It's like your creative streak is rolling and then 'BAM' no friggin ink! I like this write it's like you don't the mind not really wanting to take time to process thoughts, but to just write every thought down. I like this method. I do this sometimes and am required to in my homework which I think is a good way of getting to a subject of what you want to write about. In this case needs no subject really, it's great!
This one is just exquisite and loved the flow; the idea of running out of ink just when the words are flowing, send me into a frantic search of another pen!
You are on a roll. That is how writing worked. When life give us sadness or happiness can open the door to good emotion for poetry and story. A excellent poem.
Coyote
I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :)
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