The road of ink
A Poem by
FaithfullyJennyBear
I'm on a roll,
No stopping me now.
I hit some bumps,
But I don't know how
To get out of this place
Of darkness and despair,
Where words don't exist,
No how, why or where.
I see the light,
I race to the door,
The words come back
I can write some more.
Smoothly driving,
My pen runs out of ink,
I start to panic,
My heart starts to sink.
I move on from one,
Useless, no care.
Go on to another,
It will take me there.
Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be.
© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear
Featured Review
"Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be."
Wonderful and powerful lines, Jenny! This is such a nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Indeed, we all plan our own escape from this world, to live in peace with ourselves!
Mk.t.g
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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very nice
Posted 12 Years Ago
very nice
Strong use of ryhme on a hell of a poem
your a hell of a poet my friend and this write shows just how gifted you are cheers and stay crazy Gonzo
Posted 13 Years Ago
Strong use of ryhme on a hell of a poem
your a hell of a poet my friend and this write shows just how gifted you are cheers and stay crazy Gonzo
Writing is a great form of therapy... I like the whole feel of finding good through the bad.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Writing is a great form of therapy... I like the whole feel of finding good through the bad.
There is a great flow and energy to this poem. You write with intensity and passion - love it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
There is a great flow and energy to this poem. You write with intensity and passion - love it!
The words stream very nicely. I really enjoyed the honesty and simplicity of the poem as well.
Good work : )
Posted 13 Years Ago
The words stream very nicely. I really enjoyed the honesty and simplicity of the poem as well.
Good work : )
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Well done!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Well done!
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great job sweetheart....
Orlando
Posted 13 Years Ago
Great job sweetheart....
Orlando
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a fantastic poem! I love how you wove all the words together. It flowed very nicely! I agree with the previous review; I also enjoy poems where you go from darkness to light. You did a wonderful job in desribing poetically what it's like to suddenly be way off track, but to soon come back. Great job!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
What a fantastic poem! I love how you wove all the words together. It flowed very nicely! I agree with the previous review; I also enjoy poems where you go from darkness to light. You did a wonderful job in desribing poetically what it's like to suddenly be way off track, but to soon come back. Great job!!
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I always like poetry about, "roads," or going from the dark to the light :). Excellent job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I always like poetry about, "roads," or going from the dark to the light :). Excellent job!
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
we all lose track sometimes.. but sooner or later we gotta get back.. lovely :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
we all lose track sometimes.. but sooner or later we gotta get back.. lovely :)
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 17, 2011
Last Updated on May 18, 2011
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FaithfullyJennyBear England, North east , United Kingdom
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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :)
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