The road of ink

The road of ink

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

I'm on a roll,

No stopping me now.

I hit some bumps,

But I don't know how

To get out of this place

Of darkness and despair,

Where words don't exist,

No how, why or where.

 

I see the light,

I race to the door,

The words come back

I can write some more.

Smoothly driving,

My pen runs out of ink,

I start to panic,

My heart starts to sink.

 

I move on from one,

Useless, no care.

Go on to another,

It will take me there.

Back on the road,

The white, lined sheets,

Back on the road,

Where I'm destined to be.

 

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


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"Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be."
Wonderful and powerful lines, Jenny! This is such a nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Indeed, we all plan our own escape from this world, to live in peace with ourselves!
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Back on the road,
The white, lined sheets,
Back on the road,
Where I'm destined to be."
Wonderful and powerful lines, Jenny! This is such a nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Indeed, we all plan our own escape from this world, to live in peace with ourselves!
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just goes to show, you can't keep anyone down. Nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


We all illustrate our own escape. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Back in the saddle again.
Getting back on the right track.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FaithfullyJennyBear

10 Years Ago

precisely :')
Gedalya

10 Years Ago

Totally dude, totally. (°:
very smooth. The rhyming flow is wonderful. An instant fav! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FaithfullyJennyBear

10 Years Ago

Awh why thankyou (:
I like the rhyming and the flow. Read like a song and my heart stopped to when your pen ran outta ink. lol Well done Jenny.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I suppose we are all on that road, traveling in different directions to get to the same place...This was a very interesting write...I enjoyed it

Posted 11 Years Ago


FaithfullyJennyBear

11 Years Ago

Thankyou (: Yours faithfully, Jenny
You do work magic, Jenny... taking wordless echoes and giving them a voice... letting us all feel the anguish of wanting to put our souls on the page. Please don't ever stop.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FaithfullyJennyBear

11 Years Ago

Well, although I seem to be appreciated, I may have to start writing again :p got a new one up today.. read more
An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Ah, yes, yes.. and yes! Of course! So glad to know you're writing more magic.. (:
This is the part of JennyBear I Love when reading!! That first stanza had the making of a predictable form and then you threw me off my mindset, beautifully, with a well-crafted play on the words, mixing it up the way you did. : ) I Love it. Going from the first one to the next stanza? ....road trip!! lol Can I go, too? That was fun. : ) When you ran out of "ink", it felt like we were in the mood for dinner out and only found enough money for McDonald's drive-thru!! The third stanza nailed your quick and sharp piece that may seem at other times as a "general" topic.... writer's block, I'm assuming, but you have written about something that I could NOT do...... so you get a straight up "daps" and a hug for pulling it off, JennyBear!! I DO think the first two commas in the third stanza should be semi-colons, though. It takes the place of "nor, and, and yet". Very cool. Looking to my left on your page, right now, I see you have purple hair. ; ) I'm thirsty AND inspired!! Beautiful JennyBear.......... xoxo -Your Mark

*Huge Hugzz for JennyBear!!*

Posted 11 Years Ago


FaithfullyJennyBear

11 Years Ago

Oh my :') I love your comments sir :D you've made me really want a mcdonalds... take me? :p and yes,.. read more
This is really good, beautifully written :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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