The cougher's pain

Her lungs fill up with troublesome air,

She cannot breathe, but people stare.

 

Coughs were echoed upon deaf ears.

It hurt her too much, She ended in tears...

 

For such a sweet girl, Her lungs were not well.

Maybe asthma was the problem, It made her throat swell.

 

The poor girl could not breathe But no one cared to help.

An inhaler, a drink? She had to find herself...

 

She tries her best to laugh it off. But it just does not work.

Her laughs will go unheard for a while.. The distant croak will lurk.

 

This is the outcome of a terrible cough.

Her lungs just couldn't handle.

My deepest sypmathy goes to the girl.

My sweet friend Hannah Randall.

 

 

Author's Note

Just a poem for my best mate, she is rather ill right now and I thought a poem might make her smile :P even though it's quite sad, but hey, i got her name to ryhme :D xx

For Hannah, or as our friend Jess calls her 'slag' :') xx

Reviews

[Bertie]

A sweet poem from an interesting persepctive and your use of couplets work perfectly.
Well written :)

[Panda In The Morning]

i love the ending,
you must really like her if you right her a poem,
i love poems that rhyme :) well done.

[Aidz]

Nice heartfelt scribe well done