The feeling for something so wrong.

I would do anything for you to look at me

In the loving way you once did.

The first kiss we shared

Sent me into a daze of happiness

None stop smiling for the rest of the night.

 

There's times I cannot see you,

I do understand..

We are not meant to be.

But the way you touched me

It send shivers down body.

 

Laid on your couch,

Half watching the movie

Half staring into your colour changing eyes.

Wondering what you think about

When your hands touch me.

 

The feelings we share,

We are not meant to be.

But I'm slowly falling in love.

This isn't fair.

Just because society might not accept it.

Doesn't mean I can switch my feelings off.

 

I want to be with you.

I can't stop thinking about you.

The minute I fall asleep I dream only of you.

And your wandering mind.

Your heavenly smile

I love to see it.

 

Even if I only got to see you for fifteen minutes

It would make my day so happy.

 

It's weird how I could feel so much

For something so wrong

Something that should not happen

Is the only thing that can make me smile.

 

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Throw out the social handbook and just BE.. be yourself and be with whomever you wish to be with.. great poem of longing and need.

[Sarah Morgan]

This went into my favorites because this was indeed when I read it I thought "Oh, this was exactly how I felt on my first date with the man I fell in love with" which is now my husband. I always want that first innocence back from the first time we dated.. it was so cute. The first part really just made me miss how you feel when you first in love - when you get married sometimes you have to work, your busy and you know love can fade, but there are the times much like in this piece that happens every so often that makes that first date worth it :) Nice write!

[I Am Svetlana]

Sometimes it's good to fall for the wrong thing...or the thing we aren't supposed to originally fall for. It's sends a strange feeling in our bodies when we are embracing that rejected thing or person. It makes us feel as if we can conquer just about anything. We aren't supposed to have or want it...but we do anyways. Just to prove people wrong about their outlook on that thing or person. Just to make them see the other side. To make them see the same side that you do...to make them understand it just as well as you do.

[Ruth]

We can only go with our emotions, its worrying at times.....wonderfully voiced love, the balance is a fine one! xx

[Joshua J. Certain]

Very captivating, like a story being told in poetry form

[M.Babu]

Wonderfully captured!!

Drifted into the confines of the piece and into the familiar environment of the sentiment you envoke here.

~M.Babu~

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Just classic.

[Aidz]

Ahhh one day

kewl write

[Helpless]

The first kiss we shared
Sent me into a daze of happiness
None stop smiling for the rest of the night......


Half staring into your colour changing eyes.
Wondering what you think about
When your hands touch me......


this is probably one of the sweetest things i have ever read! so romantic and passionate!

[Fenner]

Very nice Jen, so much feeling in this poem. Very sweet. xx