You're always on my mind

You're always on my mind

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

You're constantly on my mind,

When I sleep, when I wake,

I see your smile,

I hear your voice,

My heart fills up,

My smile comes back.

 

I'm happy I met you,

By total accident,

It may have been,

But it was the best accident

I've ever had.

 

The only thing I wish for

Is to see you  smiling,

I would crawl to the far edges of the world

Just for a glimpse of your angelic face.

 

You eyes have me hypnotised,

Lost in your eyes, Forever in your soul

To stare lovingly into the eyes that stare back.

 

My arms wrapped around you

Don't want to be anywhere else.

 

You're always on my mind..

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


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sorry...my comment cut off but shouldn't it be "Your" instead of "You" if it supposed to be that way please just set me straight so I know.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a great poem I especially like the line

"I would crawl to the far edges of the world
Just for a glimpse of your angelic face."

In my opinion I think we all have someone that we would do that for I know I do whether we like to admit it or not...this was beautiful I was wondering something...in the fourth stanza I could be just reading it wrong but shouldn't it be "Your

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the title. The title is one of the great songs from a long time ago. The poem is beautiful. A outstanding poem of love. Great description and story in your words.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a cute poem. I really think being in love and happy is the important thing. I mean your life would be different if you never met the person that made you happy. This poem was beautiful and I understand. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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