You're always on my mind
A Poem by
FaithfullyJennyBear
You're constantly on my mind,
When I sleep, when I wake,
I see your smile,
I hear your voice,
My heart fills up,
My smile comes back.
I'm happy I met you,
By total accident,
It may have been,
But it was the best accident
I've ever had.
The only thing I wish for
Is to see you smiling,
I would crawl to the far edges of the world
Just for a glimpse of your angelic face.
You eyes have me hypnotised,
Lost in your eyes, Forever in your soul
To stare lovingly into the eyes that stare back.
My arms wrapped around you
Don't want to be anywhere else.
You're always on my mind..
© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear
Reviews
Great job explaining the feeling of never letting someone go, even in your mind. I hope that, if someone inspired this, they got the chance to read it.
Posted 11 Years Ago
sweet
Posted 13 Years Ago
sweet
Awe so sweet. To sum it up how people truly feel when they really like somone. The descriptions and all of them always on your mind because you care for them. I feel the same way about a guy but,will i ever be on his mind.Well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Awe so sweet. To sum it up how people truly feel when they really like somone. The descriptions and all of them always on your mind because you care for them. I feel the same way about a guy but,will i ever be on his mind.Well done.
This is EXACTLY how i feel about a guy. I love this poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is EXACTLY how i feel about a guy. I love this poem.
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Such a cute and sentimental piece.
"You're constantly on my mind,
When I sleep, when I wake,
I see your smile,
I hear your voice,
My heart fills up,
My smile comes back.
I'm happy I met you,
By total accident,
It may have been,
But it was the best accident
I've ever had." Loved this part so much i had to quote you.
Love and adoration rings out in every syllable and that's very admirable.
Great one here:)
~M.Babu~
Posted 13 Years Ago
Such a cute and sentimental piece.
"You're constantly on my mind,
When I sleep, when I wake,
I see your smile,
I hear your voice,
My heart fills up,
My smile comes back.
I'm happy I met you,
By total accident,
It may have been,
But it was the best accident
I've ever had." Loved this part so much i had to quote you.
Love and adoration rings out in every syllable and that's very admirable.
Great one here:)
~M.Babu~
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love the sweetness in your poem, 'always on my mind', I love this idea, and the words you used, emotions in this poem etc. I love this poem, so beautifully written, you've written those sweet poems, I love them all!
A very relatable piece of writing!
Nice Written!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love the sweetness in your poem, 'always on my mind', I love this idea, and the words you used, emotions in this poem etc. I love this poem, so beautifully written, you've written those sweet poems, I love them all!
A very relatable piece of writing!
Nice Written!
A sweet and relative piece that speaks to every reader, well done
Posted 13 Years Ago
A sweet and relative piece that speaks to every reader, well done
@£15 + A S**t BJ... who are you thinking of? I reckon you're thinking of good old £15.99 + A cracking Handjob? chortle chortle ;P
and 'ere, Jen'ed, good stuff :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
@£15 + A Shit BJ... who are you thinking of? I reckon you're thinking of good old £15.99 + A cracking Handjob? chortle chortle ;P
and 'ere, Jen'ed, good stuff :)
who's this about? i reckon he shares one initial with me...
Posted 13 Years Ago
who's this about? i reckon he shares one initial with me...
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Oh sweet love will always hunt us. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh sweet love will always hunt us. :)
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FaithfullyJennyBear England, North east , United Kingdom
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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :)
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