Eyes

Different colours

Different meanings..

Blue usually means happy.

Green usually means chilled.

Brown usually means mysterious.

Grey usually means sad.

I can prove this all wrong.

I have green eyes.

I'm usually upset.

My best friend has blue eyes,

She finds it hard to smile.

My other friend has grey eyes,

She's usually happy, but not always.

My other friend has brown eyes..

Okay, he is mysterious..

But he is constantly happy..

Don't judge a person by their eyes.

Even though their eyes

Can tell you their life story.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Interesting take on eyes! good job.

[Mbali]

nice telling, i love it

[Ravyne Hawke]

love the imagery of the eyes and the stories they do or do not tell.. most excellent write!

[Coyote Poetry]

The color of eyes can tell many stories. It is what you are looking at and how you are feeling. Look at the many songs about the colors of eyes and the effect on us. I like your logic in your poem. Last line is face.
"Don't judge a person by their eyes.
Even though their eyes
Can tell you their life story."
A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jazique]

Awe I'm sad( that is slightly true at times) Well done. Kind of gose with the concept of don't base a book by its cover. So really the nest time we look into someone's eyes and they ask what we see. We can really say "I don't know". Well done. Very imaginative and outspoken. Wonder what yellow eyes mean. Very truthful and enjoyable.

[Aidz]

eIndeed th eyes convey the true .. kewl write

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A soaring piece of writing, very well written, good job

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

very nice!

[DeadToTheWorld]

nice write here the eye colors are really cool when described in the right way...I always believed that eyes were a gateway to the soul...this write was wonderful :)

[Helpless]

can reminds me of a story that i have been writing... a lot of it revolves around eye colour. eyes are amazing aren't they?