dandelions

What would you do if one dandelion held all of your past?

Would you blow it away? Forget everything?

I know I would...

The thing with different people,

Is that they all have different pasts.

No one is the same,

One may have been abused,

One may have had a perfect childhood.

Is there such thing as 'perfect'?

I am the unlucky one...

My best friend has it all...

It's weird how you become so close

To someone so different...

Every memory.

One dandelion.

It's up to you what you do...

Reviews

[Jimmy Toots]

Very inventive metaphor, I like this. I believe in the saying "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger" our past is our identity and life makes people who they are for better or worse. Aside this, once again an excellent choice of metephor, putting the past into an object and interesting outlook on life and bonding, good stuff

[M.Babu]

The nature of the universe is an oddity in itself. Opposites attract, likes repel:)

I don't believe there is 'perfect'. But there definitely exists a point close to consummation. Those who have don't always see and appreciate what they have and thus those who don't envy them deeply.

Tall and wise write if you ask me.

You've garnered more respect from me:)
Your cyber friend,
~M.Babu~

[Katub]

I'd blow it away. Love this!! xxx

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wonderful write! (:

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

choo choo on the train to destiny, next stop happiness xoxoxoxox

[Coyote Poetry]

It would be cool to be able to blow away all the pain of life and start over again. I like the questions in the poem. Sometime we think another life maybe better. Each set of shoes will learn sadness and happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem. I like poetry that ask questions and make you think. You did both.
Coyote