Stupidly Nothing.

Why am I so stupid?

I can't get you...

You're perfect, in every way.

I'm nothing.. at all.

I'm your goddess?

I'm your baby bear?

I'm your angel?

I'm not.

You have your girl...

I mean nothing to you.

 

Why am I so stupid?

I thought your words were true...

I bet you laughed at all the things

I thought from me to you.

I thought that you were mine,

Ignoring everything else,

Not stopping to think

It was all a lie.

 

I'm nothing Baby,

And you know it.

Taken for a fool

In the world of 

Lies and Hatred.  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I tell people. In the end the truth will come out. I could feel the hurt and disappointment in the poem. Sometime it is good to know the truth. The truth will set you from useless and no good people. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[BigDaddySiddle]

i like the part where it says "taken for a fool" coz it's cool

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

been there,done that..very relatable, great write (:

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"Why am I so stupid?
I can't get you...
You're perfect, in every way.
I'm nothing.. at all.
I'm your goddess?
I'm your baby bear?
I'm your angel?
I'm not.
You have you're girl...
I mean nothing to you."

I could relate to this stanza SO MUCH! This poem was wonderful. I could relate to it, like I said before :P
Keep writing :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

genius piece of art!

[DeadToTheWorld]

I loved this piece of writing...it would be an honor of putting in my library...great job...

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Wow, this was very depressing.
I like the poem because sometimes we are stupid and love blinds us with words that we want to hear.
Good job either way!

[Chris]

Jenny, I am reading all of your requests today, you are slowly making me very sad. :[
However! This is yet another wonderful poem. :] Your emotions show through it as they always do and I applaud you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Talent is merely learned, what we have here is a rendition of emotion, clean a sufficient, strifes for plausible and gained true grit, well done

[Jill Wallflower]

aww this is so sad ): but so good and well written