The weakness

As the moonlight shines down,

On your angelic face,

A tear rolls out of my eye,

The person I knew oh so well,

Was just a madman in disguise.

 

I loved you with all my heart,

Yet you tore away the layers,

Of my weak form of love,

Wiped away my tears,

With the hands, you broke me with.

 

What I don't understand,

Is why do you hurt me,

When you used to call me

You're precious gemstone,

Worth more than life itself?

 

Make up your mind baby,

Please give me an answer,

Did you ever love me?

Reviews

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A plea for the truth, to know if love was there. Good poem my friend.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nice poem, well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we need to know the answers to some questions. To give us reason to stay or to go. I like how you set-p the poem. Making the ending have purpose and reason. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is simply Awesome..
I know how it feels all too well..
keep up the gone work and Thanks for sharing such a relateable Piece.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

ooh nice (: can totally relate

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"I loved you with all my heart,
Yet you tore away the layers,
Of my weak form of love,
Wiped away my tears,
With the hands, you broke me with."

I could relate to this stanza. I think this poem is about an abusive relationship. This is wonderful, Jenny. Keep writing :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

beautiful write!

[DeadToTheWorld]

I loved this of course every time I read something you write it makes me want to keep going until the very end...never has anyone expressed something like this before...in such a wonderful,beautiful way...wonderful job as always...

[Chris]

You write so well and so strongly. I can't help but want to get inside your head and figure out where all of this comes from. What it all stems from.

You have done beautifully, as expected. :]

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Touching, elegant and scarce, I feel weakened by the pure talent of wording, well done and keep writing