Between my mind and my words

I am fine.

I am not going to cry.

I am fine.

I just want to die.

I am fine.

I can't stand it anymore.

I am fine.

My heart is breaking in two.

I am fine.

 

Don't worry.

Please don't leave me.

Dont' worry.

I hide my feelings away.

Don't worry.

My bright green eyes fill up.

Don't worry.

Need to keep smiling.

Don't worry.

Can't take it anymore.

 

And with a gun to my head, I end this torture,

Bye bye world,

you have never been good to me.

Reviews

[hopelove]

i feel sorry for you you sound like me

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"And with a gun to my head, I end this torture,
Bye bye world,
you have never been good to me."

I could really relate to this stanza. Wonderful poem. You are a great poet :) Keep writing.

[DeadToTheWorld]

this made me sad...like I wanted to cry...I think this is going to go into my library...great job...it was an emotional piece of writing...

[R.Inc$]

stylistically sound and literally pleasing

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very sad, yes, but still an excellent poem

[Jill Wallflower]

Wow, this is amazing! Its so sad though ): so well written

[PIG-RHCP]

Good, your not suicidal though are you?

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem till the end. Better to live and torture the person who broke your heart. The description was strong with a sad ending. A very good poem.
Coyote