Forever yours

I've finally found you,

My knight with no armour,

The rescuer of my broken heart,

I wish I could hold you

In my arms forever,

Just to sit and look into

Your sweet, tender eyes,

And tell you you're mine,

To watch you as you sleep,

And lay in your arms,

Sleep next to you,

Dream of you,

Never letting you leave my mind,

Because it's you I want to be with,

I don't need anyone else,

While I have you in my life,

Your eyes,

Your hair,

You smile,

Your words,

Everything about you,

I love and care about,

I want you to be mine,

Forver yours,

Jenny x

Reviews

[Linear]

This is every guys dream, to have a pretty girl say that, or better still write that.....beautifully penned :O)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

To know that feeling of the heart, good poem my friend.

[M.Babu]

Really cute tone you implied here:)

Poems like these are just beautiful.

Nice one.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

This is really cute. I loved it and I could easily relate to it c: Keep writing...

[Erinne S.]

I loved this! Beautiful piece! One correction the title is misspelled. It should be Forever... not forver. Other than that I loved this piece. So sweet and romantic :)

~Erinne

[Misty Blue Eyes]

to be that some one for ever.. its awesome to feel that love.

[Delykaa xx]

aww this is so sweet, keep riting :)

Delykaa xx

[Aidz]

Kewl write flows nicely

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and kind poem of love. I like how you weaved the story. The flow and emotion of desire was strong in your words. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote