Single..
A Poem by
FaithfullyJennyBear
You lose your love,
It doesn't matter,
You will live,
Your heart is taken
But it don't matter,
You will move on,
besides, being single?
sounds okay..
I guess..
I'm sorry,
I'm not supposed to be upset,
Still no tears come from my eyes,
No more chances,
No more love,
No more care.
Goodbye...
© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear
Reviews
This is a piece many people can relate too! Fantastic job. Loved it!
~Erinne
Posted 13 Years Ago
You'll find love some day, the worst thing you can ever do is give up hope... Great work (: x
Posted 13 Years Ago
You'll find love some day, the worst thing you can ever do is give up hope... Great work (: x
same here, very good
Posted 13 Years Ago
same here, very good
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I really liked this. I could relate to it. Keep writing...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I really liked this. I could relate to it. Keep writing...
Life goes on, heartbreak is always at the edge of the cliff if you want to put it like that but either way, all wonders come to the point where we need to take control and leave it behind. For not doing that, it will consume us. Its more of maturing and standing up to our problems.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Life goes on, heartbreak is always at the edge of the cliff if you want to put it like that but either way, all wonders come to the point where we need to take control and leave it behind. For not doing that, it will consume us. Its more of maturing and standing up to our problems.
With every heart-break we get a bit more realistic, and with every let down love means a bit more deep down.
Posted 13 Years Ago
With every heart-break we get a bit more realistic, and with every let down love means a bit more deep down.
Aww Jenny I am so sorry.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Aww Jenny I am so sorry.
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 11, 2011
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FaithfullyJennyBear England, North east , United Kingdom
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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :)
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