Single..

You lose your love,

It doesn't matter,

You will live,

Your heart is taken

But it don't matter,

You will move on,

besides, being single?

sounds okay..

I guess..

I'm sorry,

I'm not supposed to be upset,

Still no tears come from my eyes,

No more chances,

No more love,

No more care.

Goodbye...

 

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Quite a moving poem, Jenny. I think we all know when it is final. Great write!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Straight to the point my friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I don't find this sad at all my darling. It's almost as if your using imagery to slap convention. Well done, I see power of female instituter is not lost on those jaded by society, great wording and flow.

[M.Babu]

Sadly confessed my friend:)
Nice job

[Coyote Poetry]

Two side to every coin. You maybe single. More time for personal things and friends. But easy to get use to someone hanging around. I like the directness and strong ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

short & sad,but a wonderful poem (:

[S.G.P.]

Very sad, great poem.

[Jazique]

Nice to feel it and to lose. As to be single again. It rhymed in some ways so I must say well done. Simple.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i have been here before.. love the poem great write

[Fenner]

It's okay to be upset, because what hurts you today, shapes you tomorrow. I know it sucks right now, but in the end you'll come off stronger from this. I'll look forward to seeing how you progress through your words that always tell me a story. :)