My love

I say goodbye, As it were our last,

I dread the thought of leaving.

I miss you more with every breath,

I crave the love I'm recieving.

 

When I look into your dark brown eyes,

All I see is the care.

The times without you, I really despise,

I constantly wish you were there.

 

My heart cries for you, When you walk away,

I need you in my arms forever.

Because in my heart you will always stay,

Because my love for you will end never.

 

So bye-bye gorgeous, goodnight my sweet,

I miss you untill the day.

My heart recieves your warm embrace,

You're never getting away.

Reviews

[Katub]

this is ever so sad but i love it

[BlueberryKisses]

Sweet poem, I love it :)

[Erinne S.]

This is so sweet and beautiful. I loved it! It totally captured the emotion and feeling behind "Love"

Great job!

~Erinne

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

nice, another wonderful poem (:

[Joey Irwin]

I love this poem, It's amazing. Truly captures how we think of love, the person we love and how losing them would affect us.
I adore this poem...keep writing!! :D