My Sonnet

My Sonnet

A Poem by FaithfullyJennyBear

You eyes glisten like the rain or the snow.

Your smile, as beautiful as natures beauty itself.

Your love, I cherish as if it were my child.

Your heart, I will never break.

You are mine, You always will be.

Your mind holds all you know, all you have.

I wish to know what happens in your head,

And then to help you through life.

Your words, I could listen to them forever, never letting you stop talking.

Telling me all you know and care about.

Your life, I want to be in it forever,

Never leaving you as I am yours.

And my love for you stronger than the angel of the heavens,

As you are the Angel of my heart.

© 2011 FaithfullyJennyBear


Author's Note

FaithfullyJennyBear
this might not actually be a sonnet but oh well :P
My first try :3 xx

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"Your mind holds all you know, all you have."
That was the only line that didn't seem to flow well with the rest of the poem, but that's just my opinion.
I think this was really well done :)
Very nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


N'aww, I love you too (:
Just kiddin' d:

This is awesome, Jennyy (:
It's all romantic and "n'aww" (:

How do ya write sonnets? I've forgotten but I want to do one d: xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2011
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FaithfullyJennyBear
FaithfullyJennyBear

England, North east , United Kingdom



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I'm Jenny, I'm 18, and my mind is made for poetry, it's how I think, it's how I get my feelings out, It's how I'm heard, may not always be good but it's how I feel inside :) I've also had every colou.. more..

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