My Sonnet

You eyes glisten like the rain or the snow.

Your smile, as beautiful as natures beauty itself.

Your love, I cherish as if it were my child.

Your heart, I will never break.

You are mine, You always will be.

Your mind holds all you know, all you have.

I wish to know what happens in your head,

And then to help you through life.

Your words, I could listen to them forever, never letting you stop talking.

Telling me all you know and care about.

Your life, I want to be in it forever,

Never leaving you as I am yours.

And my love for you stronger than the angel of the heavens,

As you are the Angel of my heart.

Author's Note

this might not actually be a sonnet but oh well :P
My first try :3 xx

Reviews

[BlueberryKisses]

A great Sonnet :) love it

[LoopyLoo]

Well done.:-) Another Great Read.:-)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

So sweet ; )

[The old me]

great writing.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

[loved] this, nice job!

[Aidz]

Nice write

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Awww...kawaii.

[Jeff]

Very good poem.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i love the ending line, very powerful and moving

[Maggie]

This is a poem meant more for a child than a love...adoration.