It started with a Buzz...

*Buzz Buzz*

I got a text,

Who is it?

I hope it's not him,

I ran away from him a long time ago,

I hope he hasn't found me,

I don't want to go back to him,

He petrifies me,

What if it's her?

What if she wants me to come home?

I can't, he will find me,

I don't want him back in my life,

I don't want to read the text,

What if he knows where I am?

What would I do then?

I'm too scared...

*Buzz Buzz*

*Buzz Buzz*

Oh no, my phone is ringing...

It's an unknown number...

I'm going to have to answer it,

It's probably just my friend

Wondering if I want any food bringing over,

 

'Hello?'

'I know where you are...

I'm going to get you.'

*beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*

No...

I'm going to have to get away now

I have to run

I have to get away

Keep running for the rest of my life..

Oh no, there he is..

'No, NO I'M SORRY, No put the gun away, I won't run away anymore!!!!'

*BANG*

 

'Bye-Bye Chloe, you can't run away from me again.'

Author's Note

No idea why I wrote this, I got bored and I have a weird imagination :P

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild and crazy poem. I understood the poem till the ending.
" 'Bye-Bye Chloe, you can't run away from me again.' "
I don't like phones. I'm one of the last people I know who won't carry a cell phone. I like the desperation and desire to escape in this poem. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[SweetHeart (:]

seems good lol :D for being bored(:!!

[Ravyne Hawke]

It definitely reads like a short short story, but works ok as a poem too... very dark, mysterious until the end.

[Linear]

Not really a poem, more like a short story, and verry well written, on the edge of seat stuff..........Great work Jenny

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This reminds me of a girl who is a victim of domestic abuse who has escaped but still lives in fear. She is finally tracked down and your chilling end of your poem sends shivers.

[Kasey Klein]

Love is often equated with ownership, which is such an ironic concept when you think about it.

[Maggie]

This story would be amazing if there were more dialouge at the end, and more detail on the surroundings, the past, what was going on...although I thought it was indeed a very good poem to begin with!

[Ben Taylor]

"Wondering if I want any food bringing over,"
Brought over?
Anyways, that's amazingly morbid lol.
Possibly a little melodramatic..
But then again, considering the ending, I guess she had the proper amount of fear lol.
Very interesting; well done.

[Sophie Titch]

i got a bit freaked out when i saw the title! but very good, you actually are quite talented! :)

[J. C. Koch]

two words: Scary s**t. Good read though