Let me

Your heart is made of solid gold,

Yet oh so easily broken,

I can fix it,

I have the strongest glue,

I am willing to do

anything to fix

Your heart,

Just name it, and it's yours.

Your eyes full of sadness

Can be made oh so happy,

Let me make you smile,

Let me be yours...

Reviews

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

This is poetic sweetness at its finest, nicely done...

[.shalynn.009.]

Gold is a good metal to use. It's one of the more malleable and fragile metals, not like iron or steel. Also, obvioulsy, one of the more beautiful and rarer metals. This works for a heart that is easily hurt, yet a treasured one.

A sweet love poem. I like that it ended in an ellipses, leaving the reader to wonder if the speaker will be allowed to mend the broken heart of the "You". Good write. Thanks for the RR.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the kind emotion and desire to assist in the healing of pain and heartache. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Ravyne Hawke]

a beautiful poem of love and dedication.. love the imagery of the heart being gold, and yet very fragile. Excellent write!

[Linear]

Enjoyed this......and i'm sure he will :O)

[Kasey Klein]

ah, to hold a bird with a broken wing . . .

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Precious and sweet ; )

[Jazique]

Awe how nice. to fix the broken heart no matter what it takes with tools of any kind just to make someone smile and happy once again because you love them and you care. Nice work it was really sweet. We talk about broken but, it is the first talk of fixing it.

[Maggie]

Ah, what we would do for the ones we love...