The unknown creature

You throw fire from your mouth

Yet you have feathered wings,

Your skin is just so scaley

Yet you're just some kind of 'thing'

You have a tail, A bit like a fish

Yet you have cat ears and nose

Your stripy blue and white

And you look so feirce yet who knows,

Behind all of the scary looks

I bet your ever so friendy,

You have no name

But hey, who cares,

Hi my name is Jenny :)

Author's Note

My friend sent me a text saying 'want a poem challenge?'
then she sent me 'Write about a creature with no name, with features of a dragon, cat and fish, It's blue and white, has scales and feathers and the wings of a bird, it's friendly too'
So I think I covered everything :)

Reviews

[Joey Irwin]

Awwwh. This poem is ace. It's really fun and happy. I can picture what it looks like in my head.

Ending is brilliant :D

[.shalynn.009.]

"Your stripy blue and white" I think this was supposed to be "You're"

Such a cute ending. Even though this had a very specific prompt, it's quite a universal message, if taken metaphorically. We are all of us different, and that threatens some people, but we should look beyond that. To spout a cliche, never judge a book by it's cover.

This poem had a nice beat, especially in the end, and seemed like it could be a children's nursery rhyme, used to teach that theme. I liked that about it. Reminds me a little of Langston Hughes Children's Rhymes.

P.S. I love that you have poetry contests with your friends. You must be some pretty intellectual people. Good write. Keep 'em coming.

[M.Babu]

"I bet your ever so friendy,
You have no name
But hey, who cares,
Hi my name is Jenny :) " This was definitely too cute an ending! You sound do friendly and maternal here xD so i give you marks for that:)

I really adore the tone you implied facing this Aquarius Dragon Feline thingy. Nice!

[SOUL LESS]

lol...love the end. :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

an adorable poem, Jenny.. love the descriptive words, imagery and flow.

[The old me]

cool poem, very unique way to say "hi"

[LoopyLoo]

Cool good poem. :-)

[Kasey Klein]

you covered it, yes.

[Linear]

And you did so well, I so enjoy a little fun with poetry you made me smile thank you :O)

[Nikki Hope]

:p Great you didnt say my name and named me 'She'
almost perfect poem, and ill have to show you the creature when im finished on wendesday. The creatures name so far is Meela :)
Named her exactly 7 minutes ago :)