My special world

I wonder what it's like out there,

away from my special mind

Where people are able to get hurt

Where I always sat and cried,

I created my own fantasy

Where everything is good,

No more tears and no more sadness

Everything the way it should,

I wonder if people know

I live in my own head,

I decided that the normal side

Was bad so then instead

I created a whole new place,

new year and date and time,

Where not a tear can fall from

A poor hurt child's eyes,

This world is where I live,

I love it here and all,

But when I get dragged back

To reality...

My head soon hit a wall,

The real world never liked me 

It hurt me everyday,

But my world always took me back

And that's where I will stay

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Everybody need a place to rest and feel safe. The real world can be cold sometime. I like the story and desire in the poem. Sometime we must find some good people and not allow the world to push us into corners. A very good poem. You made me think this morning.
Coyote

[.shalynn.009.]

Sounds like the emotions of all writers. We create worlds because we can't deal with reality and because we need a place to go where things happen the way we want them to happen. Writers live intheir own worlds and daydream all teh time (or at least the should). I agree with Lori. I wanted a bit more description of your world, just to get a sense of your creativity and the place you feel safest. But it's still a good write. Thanks for the RR and sorry if it took me a long time to get to it.

[Ravyne Hawke]

As one who lives in her head 90% of the time, I can definitely relate well to this poem. The idea of creating our own special place.. sacred place.. a space where no one can harm you is a wonderful idea for a poem. I wish you had described your sacred place a bit, since you did so much of reality. Just a thought though. Excellent write, Jenny!

[Linear]

Now this is a lovely poem, the best I have read from you, It was a delight to read :O) and as such will enter my favorites

[Erinne S.]

If only the world was like the world you portrayed here. So much better than actual reality. This was a great write and I enjoyed it a lot.

~Erinne

[Kasey Klein]

Life is pain. Anyone tells you any different is selling something.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We need our own special world where we can escape to, where the Sun always shines. Great poem my friend.

[A.G Franke]

I think we all like to vist our own worlds. My only suggestion is adding the things you like to get away from in life. I don't really know you but knowing that you are a 15yr old I would say stress for grades,drama, parents would be good idea's. As well as dealing with guys who are jerk, pressure for sex, alcohol, drugs, ect. You may have none of this, I'm just assuming. Keep wrting! =)

[The old me]

I think a lot of people have another world. I like yours, it seems better then the world that is relaity. Very good poem.

[Maggie]

I have another world too. It's wonderful to live there, isn't it?