hi fairytale moonbeam here i enjoyed reading your poem the first cup, i can relate to some f those symptoms. a wonderful read fairy thanyou for sharing it hugs moonbeam.
I like a simple rhyming poem and this one flows easily without having to struggle to understand. It's a pleasant poem too, but strange reading this as someone from England, as we are going into our summer and May has been particularly warm so far :P
This flows very well with lots of well matched words throughout...winter is certainly approaching fast which is well reflected throughout this write...all the things that chill and in turn bring us warmth.. well done. :)
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