Why Do you Do That?

Why Do you Do That?

A Poem by astoundinglyattractive

Why do you do that?
Laugh when i wanna cry?
Do you even understand?
Can't you realize?
Yes, i'm in pain,
yes a want to die.
Yes i i love you,
and no,
i don't kno why.
Maybe its the look in your eye
or the fire in your heart.
oh, i can feel it,
i've felt its heat from the start.

Why do you do that?
Act like you can't tell?
Can't you see when i'm hurting?
Can't you see i feel like hell?
Yes, i am strong,
its true, i am weak.
Yes, i try,
and, yes i seek.
i seek the happiness
and the lightness form the truth
i seek the end,
the beginning of youth.

Why do you do that?
Play with my heart?
I'm sure that you know,
i'm sure that you know.
Or maybe you don't
maybe your blind
maybe its true,
what they say about guys.
Maybe its true, you never will see
until you her it straight from me.

Why do you do that?
always so kind.
it makes my heart melt.
it makes me cry..
even to those,
i know you despise,
your always so nice. always so kind.

Why don you do that?
close yourself off?
its like you don't know
what others can see.
they all run after you,
they are like kittens to milk.
They call it love.
i know its lust.

I see past the feeling,
the curtain of lies.
And i see the truth
behind the night.
dawn is coming,
as it always does.
Just one thing that bothers me,
last tiing i don't
understand.
Yure a boy,
not a man.
But you act like
you are nothing
act like you can't.
You can, i tell you,
you can.
But you do that to yourself
and it hurts me to watch,
tell me, my live,
Why do you do that,
when you still have a chance?

© 2011 astoundinglyattractive


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True. Very true. Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. full of emotion... and i love it. i understand this so completley. keep writing(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A poem full of emotions that connect to each other very closely. The bipolar actions of the boy in the story jump around, and the questions you posed make the flow better. There's a few spelling errors, but other than that, nicely written! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


erstand this. It is well written, and only has a few errors. But I find this easy to relate to, and full of emotion. Well done

Posted 13 Years Ago



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