In Light

In Light

A Poem by astoundinglyattractive

In light of things

i'm still living

still breathing

still being

 

I have laughred a few times recently,

and i remember

a real smile upon my lips

just a few days ago.

 

In light of things,

the people i love

are happy

and i am feeling better

than yesterday

 

I saw the scars on my firends wrist

and i looked at my own

and imagined how easily

they would appear.

But, in light of things,

my arms a clean

and unscathed.

Even though

my soul isn't pure

 

In light,

things arn't as bad as they could be.

© 2011 astoundinglyattractive


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Powerful and elegant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think you could easily get published. This is very good, just grammar and spelling stuff. Pretty good.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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