Subtle change

Short story, to waste the time.

 Tender kisses, murmers in the dark, the sweet feeling

of his body against mine. Bliss

 I nuzzle into his neck and relax, he's still awake, kissing my

head, rubbing my back.

 I hear him sigh. His rubbing ceases and soon all is still.

So quiet I could hear the steady beat of his heart.

 

 I smile to myself. Smile to my little secret. He soon relaxes,

His arms loosening from his grip on me.

 Taking this chance, I move up on top of him a bit.

He likes it, doesn't complain. Little does he know...

I giggle to myself quietly.

 

  Silly Mortal, I thought as I dug my fangs

into his neck.

 He struggles. Not for long. Soon he is still, the feeling gone.

Not for me, his pulse is slowing down, blood still rushing

in my mouth.

 

 I suck him dry, get dressed, and leap out the window.

 

 

Reviews

[Dark Angel]

WTF?! That's creepy... lol. Good idea though. I think you could elaborate more but I like it.