The light

The light

A Poem by Jordan
"

Something that came into my head.

"

The light casts it's glow on my face
as I walk beside the window.
At first glance I don't realize
how my body will react with it.

The small, dark feelings I felt
just mere moments before are gone,
By the light that had caressed my face.
Which has found its' way to my heart.

I haven't realized that in your light...
In your light I learn how to love.
Your mystical light that casts out fear,
and brings in a wave of peace.

Sure, my heart is tempted by 'wants'
and starts to slowly corrupt by evil;
yet, that light never once fades away
and works yet again to bring peace.

Now, as I walk past that same window,
I don't think I'll ever forget.
The light that has brought me this peace...
no, not ever a single regret.

© 2008 Jordan


Author's Note

Jordan
Criticize however you want, I don't mind. :3

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Another really wonderful poem from you. Full of imager, beauty and faith.
I loved your description of the moment of realisation (if that it what you were trying to capture) - the delicate words you used sounded soft and yet powerful and you really managed to create some great imagery.
There is pne little mistake in the opening stanza 'it's' should be its (i think), but thats just a silly grammer thing.
Congrats on this write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Jordan
Jordan

Decatur, IL



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My name is Jordan M. Ealey, and I am a Sophomore in High School. I have a few loves, but I absolutely love Writing and Literature in general, so one of my friends introduced me here. My writing can se.. more..

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