Memories

Memories

A Poem by Crazy Claire
"

one of the best nights of my life.

"
12:34 a.m.
bouncing off each other
eyes giving away everything
lips only smiling
at a party
of New Year's Eve.
the urge to
press your lips
to mine
was incomprehensible.
that is where it all began.

© 2012 Crazy Claire


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Crazy Claire
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perfectly captured!! just flawless the way you described a moment of bliss, the way your heart skips a beat at the initial attraction to someone, how your longing deepens.. the ending was like letting the audience in on the secret, I adore this.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 3, 2012
Last Updated on June 3, 2012
Tags: memories, poem, faded butterflies, forever alone

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Crazy Claire
Crazy Claire

Los Angeles, CA



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Just trying to find a little peace. more..

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A Poem by Crazy Claire