Broken Glass

A scene from a visual novel I'm making with my friend.

When I get home I realize I've made a huge mistake. The monster that have been haunting me since my parents death awaited my return. I ran straight to my room. It was the place I felt safest, but even that would not stop them this time.
Wendigo: "KUMA!! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US HERE?!"
I panicked at the sound of the wendigo's voice. The broken pieces of my mirror still lay on my bedroom floor.
Flyman: "I'm taking control of you now, you will be no more."
I struggled against their will, but it was no use. I'm too weak. My hand reached out to the broken pieces of mirror. The last thing I felt was my wrist being slit very deep.

Author's Note

I would like to know what you think of this and what can be improved on.