I'll soon get over us, this I know is true. Then the day you start wanting me, I won't be wanting you. Someday you'll remember, someday when you're free. Memories will remind you that we were meant to be.
Meh. 'Twas well written, but while the world didn't tremble as I read, I didn't cringe in horror either. Not much criticism I can give you here. But nice work.
I'm not normal, therefore neither are my writings. I write about a lot of different things with a lot of different styles. I like to mix it up that way, not be boring (hopefully)! more..