Someday

I live oh so far away from where I want to be...

I look around

Nothing to see

It’s all the same

Not unique

Plaster walls

Abstained from color

Just four wide blocks

Trapping me inside

Keeping me here

Away from where I want to be

I’m pushed away

Because I’m not the same

A creative mind

Is an abomination

Nothing here

All so bland

Just four dumb walls

Imprisoning me

Confining me

I don’t belong

Not here, but somewhere

I’ll find my place

I’ll break away

Someday

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. I thought I'd make this one look a little fancier. I'll probably do that to my poems from now on :)

Reviews

[Ki]

I love this. It's beautiful and true.

[Xfaerie corpseX]

The more of your poems i read the more astonished i am! you're an amazing writer! keep up the good writes.

[the_(in)sane_one]

Wow Hanna, you continue to amaze me with your brilliant poems. I know exactly what you speak of in this poem and we are so much alike it's scary. I really like "A creative mind/Is an abomination" It really feels like that at times. Like people like us don't belong. And in a way we don't but we're awesome so who cares. :)

[Keevan]

Wow! Nice write d00d! and by the way.....
EVIL! I HOPE WE DON'T HAVE THAT SAME SUB TOMORROW IN SCIENCE!!!!!!

[PaperHearts]

Wow! What a fantastic write! You wrote about a topic which I can really relate to, and I think that you did a great job in describing the emotions of feeling trapped. Although your poem started off quite melancholy, I liked the fact that this evolved into an overall feeling of hope and determination. I really liked your metaphor of the four walls, and thought that it was a creative and somewhat accurate symbol for how you feel in a situation like this. The format of your poem with the alternating colours, was really cool too. :D
~PaperHearts