Hate Your Ways

A very angry poem. Good for people who are mad at someone or have experienced a friend betrayal...I know I have

I hate the way you manipulate me

And the way you spread your lies

I hate how you just use me

Create my own demise

I hate how you think you can spin the world around your finger

But mostly I hate that you can

Suck out all my happiness

Drain out all my love

Leave me on the street to die

And watch me get back up

Come crawling back to me

Once you think I've been refilled

Suck me back in again

Then go in for the kill

I hate the way you drain my heart

Hard to think about anything else

Take away my inspiration

And leave me with big fat welts

I hate the way you make me your friend

So loyal at your side

Always keep coming back

So long and hard I tried

I'm so sick of this abuse

I'm so sick of all your lies

I'm so sick of everything you've done to me

Now it's my turn to say goodbye

 

Author's Note

Review, flames accepted...you know the drill. Just don't flame for stupid reasons like "I wanted a poem with unicorns and rainbows, not about hatred and betrayal!" lol XD

Reviews

[Xfaerie corpseX]

that poem is amazing which is why it got 2nd in my contest!!! amazing work

[Keevan]

very emotional poem dude!
i'm not good at reviewing poems, but still. this is an angry and very good poem!
sincerely,
J.J.

[the_(in)sane_one]

Wow, very intense. I like the way it flows nicely and the resolution in the end. One of your best poems. IMO :)

[Anonymous]

Well, it sorta describes how I treated a friend once... But I learned from my mistake and I promise I will never do that to anyone ever again. (blushes and kicks ground shyly) Im not the terrible person I was. :3

[Undying Hate (Hanna)]

Lol no of course it's not about you Hime! It's about a brutal betrayal I had from my best friend during the summer...I prefer not to talk about it. Instead I channel my rage and sadness through poetry...

[Anonymous]

This isn't about me is it lol?! Hopefully not!