Who Shot Me?NO MY LOVE..?

its about the love of your life killing you.

Blood every where
Pain came to my heart
I become paralyzed
I'm dropping on my knees
I'm hitting rock bottom
My body on the floor
I'm coughing blood, I'm drowning in it
As I try to get up, I collapses, I'm screaming
I'm looking all over, trying to figure out what just happen
Asking myself is this a mistake?
I'm hearing foot prints, it becomes louder and louder
I'm trying not to close my eyes from this reality
A person with a mask come closer to me with a gun in his hand
Pointing at me with a gain on his face
I'm crying dramatically
BANG! BANG!
As my eyes get lower each every second; My mystery murder revealed is face
I seen the love of my life eyes; watching each every second as my life is ending

Author's Note

:p what inspired me to write this is a song from kill bill song bang bang and my friend too (this poem is old and its in my blogger but i thought i place it here as well).

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

i think its awsome, very well done sweetie x0x0x0x00x

[REALIZE]

It was fine imagery and depth to the write. I liked it. But I think you could've put more into the poem.